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Nico's Notes's avatar

I dont know a lot about poetry because I dont read a lot of it but this is beautiful and I would read more like this

Cherrytitlefight's avatar

Delayed response - but thank you so much! Poetry can be whatever you want it to be, that’s what I’ve always thought. Doesn’t have to rhyme, can be longer prose or short poems :) . Thanks for giving my poem a chance and a read.

Ash Ivory's avatar

Wonderful! Sucks that I can't relate, unfortunately, but I really feel your emotions through this piece! Yay!

Livio Serra's avatar

I was rather moved. Damn!

quince is a fruit like apples's avatar

beautiful !!

Jasmin Soee's avatar

Hello, so happy to connect with you 🤍 I just subscribed to your content, and I hope you feel like subscribing to mine too 💌 xx

Source Of Peace's avatar

To love you, mom, for better or worse, through sickness and health

I ask where He was back then.

👌

Cherrytitlefight's avatar

Thank u so so much for reading. Means the world.

irene's avatar

this is so beautifully written. as a christian it's a shame how people often look down on how religion looks in other people's perspective. we are all human, after all. again, beautifully written!!!

Cherrytitlefight's avatar

This means so so so much. Thank you for reading! My mom is still a devoted believer, despite all her hardship, and I can’t help but admire how much faith she has.

Barbie's avatar

This is so beautiful, love it.

l3tters from within 💌's avatar

Too real. And yet sometimes, I still find myself wanting to talk out loud to Him but feeling like maybe I’m not the kind of woman he wants to listen to.